To Ms. Hancock
Remember?
The first time you came into the classroom,
Everyone stared at you as you were the fresh air of early mornings.
I liked you,
As if it was a connection between you and me.
Remember?
The first time you introduced metaphor to us,
I wrote a composition that
Made you thought I had problems with my family.
Your caring and loving
was as deep as the ocean
Remember?
The time we met in highschool,
I was shy like a small girl who lost her way,
But,
the magic feelings came that
I desired to say more than “hello”
As how much I missed you.
Come back to me, please!
For my honest，cherished，and desperate heart.
For the precious and unique
memories we had
Together.
Please come back,
Please!
You have a way with words like Picasso has a way with a paintbrush. Keep up the good work, it shows.
ReplyDeleteNice Repetition!
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used "remember" as the every first word in your poem. It's sounds really passionate. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThis poem has an enjoyable form as well as a lot of meaning. Outstanding!
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